Summertime

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Haulover
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Summertime

Post by Haulover »

So summertime is here--without a doubt.

here's some new verse i started based on an impression i had while watering flowers in a round rock flower bed.

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SUMMERTIME

Something strange in my head --
Like a musical chant --
Carefully repeating itself as it gently lays a heavy burden low.
It works its spell on me.
I've heard it many times before --
Usually when walking through wide open spaces --
In the afternoon when the sun starts to bake --
This dreamlike carnival whirling around me.
What's this exotic stuff in my head?
Too thick to think through,
I feel it instead.
Too rich to eat --
Its light in my eyes is intimate.
And softly, tenderly true.
How profound this gauze-layered peripheral haze --
It hums and burns through me --
Silk liquid jade green fire rains around me.
Through this haze I see the summer flowers in their round pots --
And in the sun --
The Lord's smile --
And the shining wise eyes of summertime.
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Post by Tracie »

Very nice Haulover!!!! Happy Summer dreams,

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I enjoyed it, and sent you a PM.
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Post by Tina-Kate »

"...the shining wise eyes..."

That's a phrase to send a shiver through you!
“I am innocent. I leave it to my counsel to speak for me.”
—Lizzie A. Borden, June 20, 1893
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