"The Law-Breakers of Chicken Double D-Lite"

ddnoe · Post by **ddnoe** » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:06 pm

Does anyone have any thoughts on my short story that is in the most recent edition of "The Literary Hatchet"?

Stefani · Post by **Stefani** » Mon Jan 18, 2010 2:12 pm

I really liked it. I thought it well written and enjoyable. A very nice surprise from the writer of nonfiction!

Tina-Kate · Post by **Tina-Kate** » Tue Jan 19, 2010 12:20 pm

Reminded me very much of Stephen King's short fiction.

augusta · Post by **augusta** » Sat Apr 17, 2010 12:20 pm

I liked your use of "Spam pink". That was a good visual I thought. I thought your characters were wonderful. I wonder if you used the characters' names too much in the dialogue, when "he", "she" or something else could have been used. I thought the story was very interesting, but I hate to say I didn't get it. That's my fault, I'm sure. I can't get into Sci-Fi. I hope you submit more fiction. I think there was a lot of creativity in your piece.